这篇英语短文，改错，简单的！！！！！英语好的看下！！

hello everyone ,today is my speech.
改成hello everyone ,today I will give you a speech
I hope everyone can listern这句话太不礼貌了
改成I will appreciate you attention.
In the festival. people to eat Sweet dumpling
改成In the festival,people usually eat Sweet dumpling
One family in the house together make Sweet dumplings.
改成The whole family get together in the house to make sweet dumplings.
people will go to the Street to see lanterns
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Hi, everyone. Today, it is my turn / to talk. Your attention will be really appreciated. (这个是偷的哪好第一个歼哗回答的哈。)
The Lantern festival is the first important festival after the Chinese new year, in the Chinese calender. In this festival, people will eat sweet dumplings. (这个元宵李改铅的翻译我不确定). The whole family will stay together and make the sweet dumplings together, since the sweet dumplings are round, and that means reunion. In the festival, people will go to the street to see the festive lanterns. There are lots of pretty lanterns in the street. People are celebrating the reunion.

hello everyone, I’m very happy to give a speech today. I hope everyone can listen to me carefully. The Lantern Festival is an important festval after the spring Festival . In Lantern Festival . people usually eat sweet dumplings. Everyone come back home and make sweet dumplings together, because sweet dumplings represent family reunions. people will go to the street to see lanterns. There are many lanterns along the street. Lanterns are very beautiful. People are happy, because they can get together.

Hello everyone.Today is the day when it's my turn to give you a speech .I believe you will listen to me carefully .The Lantern Festival is an important festival after the spring Festival. During the Lantern Festival ,people tend to eat sweet dumpling .The member of the family together make sweet dumpling in the house . Sweet dumpling,which symbol the family reunions.Besides people will go to the street to see lanterns on the night.At the same time ,having many lanterns in the street ,which are very beautiful. People are so happy that they can get together and have fun with each other.